How to Write About What You Teach Without Sounding Like Everyone Else
How to Write About What You Teach Without Sounding Like Everyone Else
Open any 10 course landing pages on the same topic. Read the first paragraph of each. Cover the names and you probably couldn’t tell them apart.
“Are you struggling with X? Do you wish you could finally Y? This comprehensive program gives you the tools, strategies, and mindset shifts you need to Z.”
That’s the template. Everyone uses it. Nobody reads it anymore.
Here’s how to write about what you teach in a way that sounds like you, pulls the right buyers in, and lets the wrong ones self-select out.
Say the thing nobody else will say
Every field has the thing that practitioners know is true but that nobody says out loud in their marketing. The inconvenient part. The thing that sounds risky to lead with because it might cost you some sales with a certain type of buyer.
That’s usually the most effective thing to open with.
If you’re teaching people how to build a first course, you might say: “Most courses fail not because they’re badly built, but because nobody asked for them before they were built.” That’s true, slightly uncomfortable, and it immediately separates you from every course creator who opens with “unlock your potential.”
Find the true thing in your field that’s consistently underemphasized. Lead with that. The right buyers will recognize it immediately and trust you more for saying it. The wrong buyers will move on. Both outcomes are good.
Describe 1 specific person, not a broad audience
Generic marketing talks to everyone. Effective marketing describes 1 specific person so precisely that the right reader thinks “that’s me.”
Instead of “for professionals who want to create online courses,” try: “for the person who spent 15 years becoming excellent at something and is now watching that expertise go underused in a job search.”
The second version is narrower. That’s the point. The people it describes will lean in hard. The people it doesn’t describe will keep scrolling. That’s the intended result. Unqualified readers are a waste of your time and theirs, and vague language attracts them.
Use your own language, not category language
Every field has its jargon, its buzzwords, its approved vocabulary. Course creators talk about “learning outcomes,” “engagement,” and “community.” That language blurs together across every landing page in the space.
The words that make you stand out are the ones you’d actually use in a conversation. Not the words that sound professional. The words that sound like you talking to someone who has the problem.
Read your copy out loud. If it sounds like a brochure, rewrite it until it sounds like a conversation. That’s the version that works.
Specific beats comprehensive every time
The word “comprehensive” appears on more bad marketing than almost any other. Buyers don’t want comprehensive. They want to know exactly what they’re getting.
“A comprehensive approach to course creation” could describe anything. “You’ll leave with a complete outline, a title, and a price” is a purchase decision.
The more specific you can be, the more credible you are and the easier you make the yes. Specificity signals confidence. Vagueness signals uncertainty. Buyers read those signals accurately.
Tell them who it’s not for
This one is counterintuitive but effective. A brief description of who the offer isn’t right for makes the people it is right for trust you more. It signals that you’re not trying to sell to everyone, that you know your audience, and that you’re confident enough in the fit to be honest about the mismatch.
“This isn’t for someone who wants to build a passive income stream without doing the work. It’s for someone who has put in the years and is ready to get paid for what they know.” That repels browsers. It pulls in buyers.
The Bottom Line
You stand out by saying the true thing nobody else will say, describing 1 specific person instead of a broad category, using the language you’d actually use in conversation, and being specific enough that the right buyer can make a confident decision. Generic marketing is invisible. Specific, honest marketing attracts exactly who you want and filters out who you don’t.
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